What do you think of this simple poem about depression?

Im guessing you chose a black dragon because not only does black represent depression and morbidity but the dragon because it's powerful as you stated in the first line of the poem. I think it's a good start to something that could be amazing if you only spent a couple minutes writing it. Depression is all consuming and feels like your spiraling out of control and losing self like the poem states. So i think it got its point across. Very well done you should expand on this poem and post it later. =)